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Henchman

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Sour Deal


I pulled the van into the warehouse. My 'customers' were already there.


Toward the back of the waiting group, I saw a man holding a briefcase.


I stepped out of my car and approached them.


Me: Got the money?


I watch them hand the briefcase to one another until it reaches me. I open it.


Me: God damn, you went all out on this one, huh?


I close the briefcase and hand them the keys to the van.


Me: It's all in the back.


With that I turn and go to leave. The men crowd around the van, unlock the doors and begin opening boxes.


I slip my guns from their holsters... I already know whats coming.


There's gunfire and I feel something fly just past my left ear, barely missing me.


I dive behind a nearby crate and cock my guns. A huge smile spreads across my face.



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Civilian

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I was freezing, but I had a job to do and I was going to do it.


I'd watched Danny go into the building earlier, driving the van full of empty boxes. I had a nasty feeling it was going to go sour, but Danny didn't care. He was a man who lived for the thrills, and he didn't care much if the money got blown up during a gunfight.


I wasn't surprised to hear his customers start shooting off, just surprised that it was so early.


Danny hadn't even made it to the outdoors.


I walked to my car, opened the trunk and took out my Tommy Guns.


It was time to get nasty.



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You want drugs, guns or booze? Go see my step-brother Danny, and bring your wallet.
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